Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an
important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus
points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
1. Many people celebrated Pancake Day by cooking pancakes at
home .
2. Other people went to restaurants some of which offered
“all you can eat” pancakes that day.
3. Pancake Day is more properly known as Shrove Tuesday, the
day before Lent, which is when Christians start the Lenten fast.
4 comments:
Pancake Day is more properly known as Shrove Tuesday, the day before Lent, which is when Christians start the Lenten fast. Therefore, many people celebrated Pancake Day by cooking pancakes at home, and other people went to restaurants some of which offered “all you can eat” pancakes that day.
YADIRINY: You need to write this as just ONE sentence;-)
Pancake Day is more properly known as Shrove Tuesday, the day before Lent, which is when Christians start the Lenten fast; therefore, many people celebrated Pancake Day by cooking pancakes at home, and other people went to restaurants some of which offered “all you can eat” pancakes that day.
YADIRINY: That's the idea:-)
Post a Comment