Correct the errors in the following sentence:
Pauls always
been borrowing his red stylish sporty-looking newer car to his brother who’s
lending it while his old battered rust-spotted white vehicle is in the garage
for repairing.
Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer;
each student should provide a different answer.
6 comments:
Paul has always lent his red, stylish, newer, and sporty-looking car to his brother who has borrowed it; while his old, battered, white, rust-spotted vehicle is in the garage getting repaired.
JESSICA: Please review the "Previous Grammar Question" for adjective word order--also check the punctuation;-)
Take 2!
Paul has always lent his sport-looking, stylish, newer, red car to his brother who is borrowing it, while his battered, old, white, rust-spotted vehicle is in the garage getting repaired.
JESSICA: Better, but in each series of adjectives there are two you need to reverse;-)
Pauls always lends his newer, sporty-looking, red ,stylish car to his brother who borrows it while his old battered rust-spotted white vehicle is in the garage for repairing.
HONGXING: I like your avatar! Now to the grammar: Check person's name and adjective word order (for help with this, see the "previous grammar question" on the blog;-)
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