Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The exotic imported sports dark red car has been driving to fast when it'd
skid of the road and the passenger too young women is injured serious.
Remember that there are many possible correct answers.
4 comments:
The exotic, dark red, imported sports car was driving too fast when it skid off the road and seriously injured the two young female passengers.
CARMELLE: Almost--think about the subject of the verb;-)
1. The exotic sports car, which was dark red and imported, was driving too fast when it skid off the road; the two young passengers had serious injuries.
2. The dark red, exotic sports car that was imported was driving too fast and skid off the road; unfortunately two young female passengers have serious injuries.
JESSICA: The first one is better (there's a verb problem in the second), but in both you need to think about the subject of the verb;-)
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