Friday, March 21, 2014

*GRAMMAR QUESTION*

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

There were to much peoples at the mall so I was hurried up shopping, I was too hurried that the shirt’s I bought's not big enough and I'm having to return them.

Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.

6 comments:

Doris177 said...

There were so many people at the mall that I hurried my shopping, and I was so rushed that the shirts I bought were too small and have to be returned.

Joseph Perera 189 said...

There were too many people at the mall so I hurried my shopping. I had been so hurried that the shirts I bought are too small and now I have to return them.

Michèle Ky said...

There were so many people at the mall that I had to hurry my shopping. I was in such a rush that the shirts I bought was too small and now I have to return them.

Michael said...

Great effort, everyone! Solutions will be coming soon!

Jen189 said...

There were to many people at the mall so I hurried my shopping. I was so hurried that the shirts I bought were not big enough and I'm going to have to return them.

Unknown said...


Original phrase: There were to much peoples at the mall so I was hurried up shopping, I was too hurried that the shirt’s I bought's not big enough and I'm having to return them.

Corrected phrase: Because there were many people at the mall, I hurried up with my shopping; I was in such a hurry that I didn't realize the shirts I bought were not big enough, and I will have to return them.