There are a number of grammatical errors in the following
sentence. Rewrite the sentence to correct for those errors. There are many
possible solutions.
Studying on my own pace is a lot of benefit for me do to I
am not needing to be worrying about no time for attend class. Being a single parent, the classes allows me working and studying and to spend time with my children.
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7 comments:
Studying at my own pace has a lot of benefit for me because I am not worrying about the time needed to attend class. Being a single parent and attending classes do not allow me to work, study and spend time with my children.
Studying on my own pace has a lot of benefits for me because I do not need to worry about the time needed to attend class. Being a single parent, the classes allow me to work, study, and spend time with my children.
I apologize, I am re-correcting my inital posting.
Study at my own pace has a lot of benefits for me because I do not need to worry about the time needed to attend class. Being a single parent, the classes allow me to work, study, and spend time with my children.
Sarah Sytsma 177
Studying at my own pace has a lot of benefits for me. I do not need to worry about the time needed to attend class. Being a single parent, the classes do not allow me to work, study and spend time with my children.
YADIRINY:That's a good solution:-)
JESSICA:You need a combination of these two versions--you made a good correction to the 1st one, and then you introduced an error in the 2nd one;-)
SARAH: Almost--you have a dangling modifier. Can you fix the error?
Hi Veronica,
Thank you for your feedback. Is it a spelling error or grammatical?
J
JESSICA: It's a word form error;-)
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