Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important
skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus points!
Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: Children were not in school for April Fool’s Day this year.
Sentence 2: Most of their practical jokes were restricted to their homes and
families.
Sentence 3: Parents probably wished that their children were in
school.
4 comments:
Children were not in school for April Fool's Day this year, and parents probably wished that their children were in school; since, most of their practical jokes were restricted to their homes and families.
VICTORIA: Reword a little avoid repetitiveness and check the punctuation;-)
Parents probably wished that their children were in school for April Fool's this year, because most of their practical jokes were restricted to their homes and families.
VICTORIA: better wording, but there is still a punctuation issue.
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