1. The
celebration of Victoria Day is associated with the arrival of summer.
2. In
many parts of Canada, it is still spring as the trees are just beginning to
leaf out.
3. This
weekend, avid gardeners flock to greenhouses to buy bedding plants for their
gardens to ensure a good start on summer.
6 comments:
This weekend avid gardeners flock to the greenhouse to buy bedding plants for their garden because the celebration of Victoria Day is associated with the arrival of summer, however in many part of Canada, it is still spring as the trees are just beginning to leaf out.
JESSICA: Almost--check the punctuation;-)
Veronica:
This weekend avid gardeners flock to the greenhouse to buy bedding plants for their garden because the celebration of Victoria Day is associated with the arrival of summer; however in many part of Canada it is still spring as the trees are just beginning to leaf out.
JESSICA: Almost--there's a comma missing;-)
Veronica:
This weekend avid gardeners flock to the greenhouse, to buy bedding plants for their garden because the celebration of Victoria Day is associated with the arrival of summer; however in many part of Canada it is still spring as the trees are just beginning to leaf out.
JESSICA: That's not where it is missing:-(
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