Much stores
and shopping centres prepare for chinese new year and Valentines day, there is a
special display, traditionally Chinese food, and decoration, although chocolate
and flowers for Valentines day,
greetings cards, and cloths with hearts and roses are common.
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Many stores and shopping centers are preparing for Chinese New Year and Valentine's Day.There are special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations; meanwhile, chocolate, flowers, greeting cards, and clothes with hearts and roses are common for Valentine's Day.
Many stores and shopping centres are preparing for chinese new year and Valentines day. There is a special display of traditional Chinese food, and decorations; however, chocolates, flowers, greetings cards, and cloths with hearts and roses are common for Valentines day.
Many stores and shopping centres prepare for Chinese New Year and Valentine's Day. There is a special display, traditionally Chinese food, and New Year's decoration. They also prepare for Valentine's Day the chocolate, flowers, greeting cards, cloths with hearts, and roses are common.
AYGUL: A good solution:-)
PATRICK:You've made a good start--now think about a number error, capitalization, and a word confusion error;-)
YADIRINY:You're on the right track--now check for agreement and a word confusion error;-)
Many stores and shopping centers are preparing for Chinese New Year and Valentine's Day. There is a special display, traditionally Chinese food, and New Year's decoration. They also prepare for Valentine's Day the chocolates, flowers, greeting cards, clothes with hearts, and roses are common.
YADIRINY: The original problems remain, and the last phrase isn't making good sense;-)
Many stores and shopping centres are preparing for Chinese New Year and Valentine's Day. There are special displays, traditionally Chinese food, and New Year's decorations. They also are preparing the chocolates, flowers, greeting cards, clothes with hearts, and roses for Valentine's Day.
YADIRINY:Much better:-)
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