Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an
important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus
points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: We are at the beginning of a new year.
Sentence 2: The weather is wintery, but we hope it is almost
half over.
Sentence 3: Some of us are thinking ahead to what the new
year will bring and that includes warmer
weather.
12 comments:
We are at the beginning of a New Year, the weather is wintery and some of us are thinking ahead to what the New Year will bring and that includes warmer weather.
Since we are at the beginning of a new year, some of us are thinking ahead to the warmer weather it will bring; we hope this wintery weather is almost half over.
At the beginning of a new year some of us are thinking ahead to what the it will bring and that includes warmer weather since the weather is still wintery; nevertheless, we hope it is almost half over.
At the beginning of a new year some of us are thinking ahead to what it will bring and that includes warmer weather since the weather is still wintery; nevertheless, we hope it is almost half over.
Since we are at the beginning of a new year, some of us are thinking ahead to what the new year will bring and hoping for warm weather; the weather is wintery, but we hope it is half over.
At the beginning of a new year the weather is wintery and we hope it is half over, thinking ahead to what the new year will bring many hope for warm weather.
YADIRINY: yes, but can you fix the punctuation?
HELEN:Excellent sentence:-)
AYGUL:yes, but can you fix the punctuation?
JILLIAN: The first version is good; there are a number of errors in the second one;-)
We are at the beginning of a new year; the weather is wintery, and some of us are thinking ahead to what the new year will bring and that includes warmer weather.
At the beginning of a new year some of us are thinking ahead to what it will bring and that includes warmer weather, since the weather is still wintery; nevertheless, we hope it is almost half over.
YADIRINY:good:-)
AYGUL:sorry--that's not it:-(
Although we are at the beginning of a new year, some of us are thinking ahead to what the new year will bring, including the warmer weather, and hoping this wintery weather is almost half over.
CHRISTINA: Good sentence:-)
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