This exercise is advanced sentence combining; it is designed
for students in Engl 177 who have completed Lesson 9 in the course.
Sentence 1: Many people in Edmonton are disappointed with
their football team.
Sentence 2: Many think that nothing much has changed even
though money has been spent and trades have been made.
1 . Use a gerund to combine the sentences.
2. Use a relative pronoun to combine the
sentences.
3. Use an appositive to combine the sentences.
3 comments:
1.Many people in Edmonton are disappointed with their football team, thinking that nothing changed even though money has been spent and trades have been made.
2.Many people in Edmonton, who disappointed with their football team, think that nothing much has changed even though money has been spent and trades have been made.
3. Many people in Edmonton, disappointed fans of their football team, think that nothing much has changed even though money has been spent and trades have been made.
YADIRINY:#1--good; #2--a word is missing; #3--good.
2. Many people in Edmonton, who are disappointed with their football team, think that nothing much has changed even though money has been spent and trades have been made
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