If the sentence is singular, change it to the plural; if it is plural, change it to the singular.
Many
young children eagerly rang doorbells in all the neighbourhoods on Halloween
while their parents stood shivering in the cold on sidewalks or sat in cars
parked at strategic locations watching their children.
2 comments:
A young child eagerly rang the doorbell in the neighborhood on Halloween while his or her parent stood shivering in the cold on the sidewalk or sat in the car parked in a strategic location watching his or her child.
Good job, Doris! But I would recommend taking a stand on the gender of the parent and child.
"His or her" sounds a little awkward.
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