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Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, which was a snowy day.
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday with some goodies.Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday as planned.Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, he loves to see the looks on the kids faces.
Accompanied by a group of children, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.When I was shopping, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, and then he delivered goodies to kids.
Some good answers here.Amanda, can you see what's wrong with your third sentence?
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Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, which was a snowy day.
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday with some goodies.
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday as planned.
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, he loves to see the looks on the kids faces.
Accompanied by a group of children, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.
When I was shopping, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, and then he delivered goodies to kids.
Some good answers here.
Amanda, can you see what's wrong with your third sentence?
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