Change the time of this paragraph. You will need to change the verb tense and any time clues. Each participant should choose a different time change and verb tense.
This coming Saturday, I will take my daughter to the mall to see Santa for the first time. I expect she will be apprehensive of this old gentleman with his big, bushy beard and hearty laugh. However, maybe she will surprise me and embrace the idea once she will realize that there will be a gift at the end of it. I am hoping she will stay happy so that we will have a nice, smiling photo of her when the photographer will take her picture.
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This past Saturday I took my daughter to the mall to see Santa. I expected her to be apprehensive of the old gentleman with his bushy beard and hearty laugh. However, she surprised me and embraced the idea once she realized there was a gift at the end of it. I hoped she would stay happy so that we would have a nice, smiling photo of her when the photographer took her picture.
I am at the mall with my daughter to see Santa. She is apprehensive of this old gentleman with his big, bushy beard and hearty laugh. She doesn't realize there is a gift at the end. She is staying happy and we are getting a nice, smiling photo of her as the photographer is taking her picture.
This past Saturday, I took my daughter to the mall to see Santa for the first time. I was expecting she will be apprehensive of this old gentleman with his big, bushy beard and hearty laugh. However, she maybe I was surprised by her and she was embracing the idea once she was realizing that there are going to be a gift at the end of it. I was hoping she will stay happy so that we could have a nice, smiling photo of her when the photographer was taking her picture.
Well done, everyone!
The past progressive is a difficult one to pull off, so there are a few problems there. But a good effort nevertheless!
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