This blog is intended for students in English 177 and English 189 at Athabasca University.
Friday, November 15, 2013
SENTENCE COMBINATION
Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is
an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences. Sentence 1: We went to the mall on Saturday so that the
children could see Santa. Sentence 2: There was a
parade through the mall in honour of Santa’s arrival. Sentence 3: By the time we
got there, the mall was very crowded.
We went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Santa and their was a parade that went through in honour of his arrival, however, by the time we got there, it was very crowded.
We went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Sanata since there was a parade through the mall in honour of Santa's arrival; however, by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded.
3 comments:
We went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Santa and their was a parade that went through in honour of his arrival, however, by the time we got there, it was very crowded.
We went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Sanata since there was a parade through the mall in honour of Santa's arrival; however, by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded.
Good effort!
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