Friday, January 17, 2014

*ALL CHANGE!*

Change the words in the following sentence as indicated.

The excited children eagerly awaited Santa at the mall.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given, and wait until someone else has posted the next change before making another. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, Participant 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Participant 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes the direct object noun, etc.

Each participant should make just one change at a time, following the order indicated below.

When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.

Changes:                                                                                                                          

1. subject noun
2. direct object noun          
3. indirect object noun                  
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)    
6. verb name      
7. verb tense

6 comments:

Doris177 said...

Subject noun: The excited girl eagerly awaited Santa at the mall.

Kanako Nishihara #177 said...

The excited girl eagerly awaited the present at the mall.

Ildiko said...

The delighted girl eagerly awaited the present at the mall.

Aman S. # 177 said...

The delighted girl joyfully awaited the present at the mall.

Kanako Nishihara #177 said...

verb: The delighted girl joyfully received the present at the small.

Michael said...

Well done!

But try to remember to number your answer and list the part of speech that you have changed, so we can keep track.

Somehow, the indirect noun got skipped!