The excited children eagerly awaited Santa at the mall.
For instance, Participant 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Participant 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes the direct object noun, etc.
Each participant should make just one change at a time, following the order indicated below.
When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.
Changes:
1. subject noun
2. direct object noun
3. indirect object noun
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)
6. verb name
7. verb tense
6 comments:
Subject noun: The excited girl eagerly awaited Santa at the mall.
The excited girl eagerly awaited the present at the mall.
The delighted girl eagerly awaited the present at the mall.
The delighted girl joyfully awaited the present at the mall.
verb: The delighted girl joyfully received the present at the small.
Well done!
But try to remember to number your answer and list the part of speech that you have changed, so we can keep track.
Somehow, the indirect noun got skipped!
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