The silver, new, shiny car was drove by Tim and I when we had gone to Western Canada seeing the Rocky mountains and some of tourist traps along the Highway; but we seen little wild animals and not a single bear: however the wild flowers had been blossoming.
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The new and shiny silver car was driven by Tim and I, when we went to Western Canada to view the Rocky Mountains and some of the tourist traps along the highway. But we saw a few wild animals and not a single bear; however the wild flowers were blossoming.
The silver shiny new car was driven by Tim and I when we went to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains. We saw some tourist traps along the highway, little wild animals but not a single bear; however the wild flowers were blooming.
When Tim and I drove the silver, new, and shiny car to see the Rocky Mountains in Western Canada, we saw some tourists getting trapped at the Highway. We saw not only a single bear, but also the little wild animals. Additionally, the wild flowers were blossomed.
Good try, everyone. But you have all missed some of the errors!
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