Sentence 1: People
have survived both Christmas and the New Year celebrations.
Sentence 2: Many
people probably ate far too much food and are now trying to lose weight.
Sentence 3: Good
times with friends and families often involve eating too much food.
5 comments:
Many people probably ate far too much food and are now trying to lose weight because good times with friends and families often involve eating too much food; nonetheless, people have survived both Christmas and the New Years celebrations.
Many people probably ate far too much food and are now trying to lose weight because good times with friends and families often involve eating too much food; nonetheless, people have survived both Christmas and the New Years celebrations.
Having survived both Christmas and New Year celebrations, many people probably ate far too much food because good times with friends and families often involve eating too much, and people are now trying to lose weight.
People have survived both Christmas and the New Year celebrations, but good times with friends and families often involve eating too much food; and they are now trying to lose weight.
Good try, everyone.
Kanako, try to use pronouns to avoid repeating your noun phrase.
Amanda, watch your semi-colon use.
Remember, the real challenge is to find the logical connection between the different sentences.
How about this:
People have survived both Christmas and the New Year celebrations, but good times with friends and families often involve eating too much food, so many of them probably ate far too much and are now trying to lose weight.
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